“ ABOUT MY SELF “
My name is Nurna Ningsih. Everyone calls me Ningsih. I was born in Pariaman March 14, 1992. I’m 19 years old, I am from Pariaman. I have three brothers and three sisters. My brothers’ name are Afrizal,Suherman, Hendra Syaputra and my sisters’ name is gusmaini, Nelly Hartati and Fatma Willis. So, I have seven members. We are happy family.
I stay in Padang now, in the boarding house. I am a student in Padang State University. In campus, I am happy because I have many friends and lecturers. They are kind to me. After that, I want to study hard because I want to be a success person. I like to study English. Sometimes I am afraid because I do not really understand. Now, I want to study hard.
I have lovely family in Pariaman, my mother, father, brother, sister and grand mother. They are very kind and affection to me. I love and miss you my parents because you take care me until now.
My hobby is reading. I like to read magazines, newspapers and books. And I also like travelling. Next, I like playing badminton. It can make my body health. My favorite foods are bakso and sate because they are very delicious. My favorite
drinks are avocado juice, orange juice, and pop ice because they are cool.
I am kind, easy going and affection to my parents, family and friends. My friends believe me because I am a good share. I am also a simple one. I sometimes do not understand with my friends. Because my friends are not affection to me.
In the class I wear skirt and veil. I am very happy. I am also happy in the boarding house because my friends and my seniors are very kind and affection to me. Sometimes I am sad because I have a problem with friends. She is not affection to me.
My friends and I go to the beach every afternoon. I study together with my friends in the boarding house every night. Friends and I sometimes eat together. So, I am happy.
when you say you lovely family in Pariaman you must give example with put transition before that
BalasHapusGood acihhhh.....However, the third paragrah is not match.... Revise it sista! You can do it...
BalasHapus* like mr. saunir said, do not use contraction sign (')in writing ;)
BalasHapus* sate = satay (4th paragraph)
* check your grammar
* add some pictures
* keep writing aciih ;)