“ RAIN “
It was heavy rain. Some people were sleeping in my boarding house, but I did not. At the time, I made homework for tomorrow. Myself sat on the chair and read a newspaper. I passed page by page on the newspaper.
Suddenly, kring....... kring...... my handphone rang. I got a message from my best friend . She asked me to go to the campus. I was afraid to go to the campus because it was heavy rain.
She had an umbrella, I applyed the message, I said “ I did not have umbrella”. Then, she said that you could borrow umbrella with your other friend “.
After that, I remember that my friend Siska in my boarding house had a umbrella. I sent a message to my friend to wait me. I took my bag and worn my skirt, veil, black jacket and shock.
Finally, I opened the door. I walked although heavy rain. When I was being on the street, I found some people. Many people ran away because she did not use umbrella.
i think your essay is not to formal
BalasHapuskeep writing
heheh... acihhh..........I think, you make a story not essay....
BalasHapusrevise it cihh! YOU CAN DO IT sista! haha